My comedy script “Don’t Eat Paper!” is one of 10 Finalists at VisionFest in NYC.
Short Synopsis: Roy is obnoxiously in love with his therapist, Joanie, whose attempt to “fire” her client unintentionally leads to his death, but Roy’s ghost expects to maintain their “relationship”; however, a wild road-trip with Roy leads Joanie to discover her true mission in life.
“Limping Towards Babylon” was an Official Selection and I went up to the High Desert to the town of Yucca Valley to attend the Scriptwriters / Composers Roundtable (6 writer / 2 composers / 1 songwriter) moderated by festival director Matt Beurois.
We weren’t really talking about our screenplays directly as there were questions about where do we get our ideas and inspiration, our influences etc. In the Q&A, I answered a question about what writers get paid by the Studios.
After the panel, we were asked to sign festival posters. I’m still not sure why. Maybe they give them out to the towns folk? While we were signing, there were a few people who came over to talk to us / ask for advice.
While I’ve been to a fair number of small film festivals, this one was unusual for two reasons: overall it was well run, stayed on schedule and unusually provided lunch on Sunday and cold and hot drinks all day (though I would quibble they should have had some kind of cream to go along with the coffee in the Green Room).
The other reason for its unusualness was just how community oriented the festival is. Granted, beyond our submission fees, the town is funding this festival, but nonetheless I found it rare. (Below Festival Director Matt Beurois.)
The Mayor (Dr. Lombardo) made both the opening and closing remarks; the Homecoming King and Queen AND Miss Yucca Valley and her court were in attendance. The night before, the Sheriff and his department showed up on the red carpet and showed off their patrol cars … all the while the festival also tried to provide “Hollywood” content during the 3 days of the festival (a visiting professional director, a visit to a Western town set, a panel on the state of Hollywood, and so on).
The Mayor
Then, after we writers / composers signed the posters, there was a block of short films and music videos, followed by an unusual pitching session because instead of pitching to Industry people, we pitched to the towns people.
So while not literally useful, my skepticism was alleviated. Not only was it good practice (having 2 minutes to pitch 20 people, one after another), the one thing I found helpful was figuring out how to stay enthusiastic and seeing what interested regular people. I could literally see when the engagement clicked in. (All of the photos above were taken by me or by my friend Michelle Babitz using my Nikon. All of the photos below were taken by the Festival’s photographer.)
Here I am pitching various locals left and center, and right, Miss Yucca Valley and the Homecoming Queen being pitched to:
Another unusual feature of the festival is that the winners received a cash award (modest but nonetheless, admirable) along with the usual paper certificate. My one real criticism of the festival was that there seemed to be a bias toward locals / people already known to the Festival to being named the winner of these awards (about 1/3). Moreover, short scripts and full lengths were lumped together in the same category of Best Script and a short script actually won. I don’t care how good a short is, it can’t be compared to the difficulty of creating a quality full length script. (Likewise a score for a short film won and thus the cash award while a full length movie score only got an Honorable Mention sans cash.)
I drove down to San Pedro for the final night of the San Pedro International Film Festival (for those outside LA, it’s the port for Los Angeles right next to Long Beach, but is only connected to the rest of LA by a narrow corridor so that it feels very much like a different city). The San Pedro downtown can be desolate in some areas but there’s an arts / restaurant revitalization in a few blocks, which is where Collage: a Place for Art and Culture is located and the place for the closing night party and awards.
“Don’t Eat Paper!” remained only a nominee but I did take part in a presentation with the winning screenwriter about our respective screenplays. An unexpected lively Q&A followed where I was asked quite a few questions and even asked for advice for the beginning screenwriter. (I actually could give her some practical advice as I’ve been doing this a while, but it was the first time I’ve ever been asked that question.) I also got to drink some Croatian wine (a sponsor of the festival)… haven’t had Croatian wine since 1987 when I took a vacation there. Next to Collage was a beautiful Art Deco former Montgomery Ward department store from 1930, which has been put to re-use.
Starting from late 2023 to this date, the script has placed in 23 competitions. Below are just some of the certificates and laurels (not pictured Final Draft Big Break Semi-Finalist):
The film has been placed in the Romantic Comedy category. (Additionally, my screenplay “Don’t Eat Paper!” is also a Finalist but in the Comedy category.)
Here’s some recent feedback I’ve received on my screenplay “LIMPING TOWARDS BABYLON”:
Slamdance Screenplay Competition short feedback: “The script has really clever dialogue, and the relationships between these characters are incredibly well-thought-out and dimensional.
ScreenCraft Feature Competition short coverage:“One of the things that really elevates “Limping Towards Babylon” is the layering of the characterization. The group all have distinct motivations and each acts with consistent agency. These are all smart and highly educated characters and yet we also see their more lizard brain impulses that sit below the surface. The contrast between what is verbalised and the subtext beneath it lends the character dynamics a great tension that sustains reader interest across the narrative.”
The Golden Script Competition Coverage“The beginning of the story hooks you right in with a strong setup, introducing Marcus and Thomas right off the bat. It hints at their comedic tone through their dialogue and actions, making it easy for audiences to relate to them. As the plot unfolds, it skillfully delves into their individual journeys, blending their career ambitions with personal obstacles. The screenplay is packed with vibrant character dynamics and hilarious exchanges. It really captures the essence of living together, highlighting all the quirks and complexities that come with it. Each housemate, from Marcus and Thomas to E and Adam, brings something unique to the table, drawing audiences in with a blend of novelty and familiarity. Following their lives, from initial interviews to everyday interactions in shared spaces, adds layers to the story and keeps viewers hooked. It’s like reliving those college days in a whole new light….”
I revised “Limping Towards Babylon.” Because, I never made a concerted effort to submit to Screenplay competitions when I first finished script, I have been sending it off in a parallel effort to my “Don’t Eat Paper!” submissions:
– 2024 – Semi-Finalist – 29th Annual Fade In Awards Drama Competition
– 2024 – Semi-Finalist – Dallas International Film Festival’s Screenwriting CompetitionAbove, a story board of the opening scene provided by Dallas International Film Festival – an excellent drawing though it’s missing one character who is in the scene
– 2024 – Semi-Finalist – Ojai Film Festival’s Screenplay Competition